You--the Black One

You--the Black One

Edrin the Cursed1408's picture

Oct. 16--No.1

We were just standing there...two people of differences...out of this whole room...the two of us were just standing here in this large ballroom of rainbows and charades-all fake nothing, meaningless....these people couldn't understand the true meaning of this night-our first meeting...us...drowning in their so-called everlasting light! It burns my skin and makes me want to retch to believe that they could even breathe with all this! But you...I noticed you....you stared at me...you looking at me with your dark eyes that have seen the suffering of this cruel harsh world....your soul cries, yet you don't show any emotion at all...you...your lips...who are you? Who is she who has caught my soul with her dark essence...her soul tainted with the harsh darkness that eats the world inside out...! What would happen if i were to taste you when i kissed those dark crimson roses called "lips"? What were to happen if I touched you and my hand went through your skin? Your white ghasly pale as the angel's white porceilin-your skin.....I wanted to do so much to you...but you gazed into my eyes as nobody else did...you looked at me as if you wanted to touch my soul with your dark essence....like you are the true essence of a child screaming in cries of pain....the Black Death in all of Rome....my black rose, my black dalhia....my true queen of darkness....you i have truelly fallen for...you are the person that any dark being that can fall for--even DEATH himself would fall for a dark beauty as you...you know i can smell that reeks of death around you...all of those tortured souls...pitiful souls that would have never got out of purgatory...you are the Reaper...the one and only person I know to gaze into someone elses soul....I know were just dying standing here...

 

--ShInIgAmI

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bonnylynn's picture

damn that was intense your very good with words do you write alot?

kill_tomorrow's picture

wicked love story!

666WISHDREMWATCHER's picture

vERY NICE,  EXCELLENT WRITTING. REMEMBER YOUR CHARACTERS THOUGH. WE KNOW WHO SHE IS MOST LIKELY, BUT WHO-WHO IS SPEAKING. WHAT TYPE OF PERSON . MORE INFO ON THAT PERSON.  : )   GOOD WORK Cool

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