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joestoutenger's picture

Ah Man!!! another got to wait for story...well hurry up with part 2..you rayne are just teasers...sounds like it's gonna be another goodie...Keep em coming..as usual I'm Hooked..lol....Peace...Joe

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Sounds awesome so far....waiting for part 2.....Smile

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babygurl8324's picture

Very interesting ending.  I didn't see that ending.

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Yupper, I knew it would be a goodie...keep em coming and i'll read em for sure....Peace...Joe

beautifulmind13's picture

That was awesome!!! I will keep a lookout for more of ur work.....Laughing

rayne72's picture

it was definitly short and to the point .it was a good read.lat's see what you come up with next

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