Redoing Promise

Redoing Promise

twistedstoryteller123's picture

Okay. I've decided to re-vamp my story entitled " Promise", because I felt it wasn't strong enough in the idea of taking you into its world. Yes, there was a story, but that's it! A story should take you into a world to feel the emotions and ideas behind it. If you see this, I am just letting you know.

Share this discussion

littleboo's picture

Thanks for the heads up twisted. Can't wait til you finish and share with the rest of us. LATER

twistedstoryteller123's picture

I felt the story was good, but it held no depth to it. A story wouldn't be a story without some type of scenery. I just put small things in there, rather than actually showing a place these characters interact.

littleboo's picture

Cool so far. When you are done please let me know. I'm curious to keep reading to see what happens. I'm hooked. Smile

Add new comment

Please login or register to post in the message boards.
By submitting this form, you accept the Mollom privacy policy.
<none>