Acid Tongue

Acid Tongue

Katrinadoesntknow's picture

I'm not very good at writing but I gave it a shot... please go easy on me.



Here we go


      I didn’t open my eyes, not yet. The grass beneath told me that I wasn’t in my bed any more. The crisp cold of the dew on the grass licked my skin with their acid tongues, slithering out from their rancid mouths, mocking me. Finally I forced myself to open my eyes, a bright blue sky greeted me with the dark clouds clinging to the loving sky suffocating her, like the menacing memories that I know will soon plague me.

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Katrinadoesntknow's picture

I've always been bad at coming up with names, its the hardest part

twistedstoryteller123's picture

It's not bad at all. I like it. You give details and emotions behind the details. Good job

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