"TOO MUCH" A POEM BY WIDOW

"TOO MUCH" A POEM BY WIDOW

widow1331's picture

TOO MUCH, TOO FAR, TOO DEEP THESE SCARES ARE,

TOO HARD,TOO HURT, TOO LONG I'VE WORKED.

TOO LATE, TOO WRONG, TOO CRUSHED MY LOVES GONE.

TOO SAD, TOO USED, TOO ANGRY I'M CONFUSSED.

TOO MUCH, TOO FAR, TOO DEEP THESE SCARS ARE.

BY CHRYTINA OPAL BETTS

COPYRIGHT* 2009CHRYSTINABETTS

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ravenjubilee's picture

this is hw i feel sometimes for sure. i keep all of my angry and negative feelings inside TOO MUCH all the time. I tend to blow up at whoever happens to be in the line of crossfire at the time. it sux,cause there is a part of me that feels horrible after one of my manic episodes,but i havent learned hw to control it so far. I just do the best i can until someone is willing or patient enough to show me a better way

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widow1331's picture

I lOVE to read others poetry too!

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twistedstoryteller123's picture

Nice poem. It held a raw animosity that I think most people either have thought, felt or witnessed in their lives.

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skilight's picture

I do agree,  (Too Much) speaks to the heart of so many things in life persuits. Almost a dawning of passage. Too many times you lay sacrifice of yourself for others only to have your soul torn and your spirit crushed, left with feeling as if your heart have been ripped from your chest. A life of tunes to a sad song. Sometimes it takes work to find your way back but you learn how not to anymore, and all those things negative and positive has a design in who you become. The affect of a thing in your life can weigh heavy if you allow it to.

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widow1331's picture

i think my poem is one that everyone can relate to at one point in thier lives or another

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