From Ashes She Has Risen

From Ashes She Has Risen

doe333's picture

From ashes she has risen,

To sing nocturnal songs.

A dark and ghastly vision

To those that did her wrong.

Her body in the shallows;

Her spirit free to roam.

She slips into the shadows

And finds her way back home.

To speak of violent purpose,

To think of mortal pain,

Can only scratch the surface

Of this, her earthly reign.

And in this path of vengeance

Her wrath will never cease,

Until they pay their penance;

Then she can rest in peace.

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Red89's picture

!!Brilliant!! . . . [X_x] . . .

twistedstoryteller123's picture

Interesting concept. I like the creepy and foreboding atmosphere of this piece. It feels like something is lurking in the dark; waiting to grab you when you least expect it.

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doe333's picture

Thanks for the comments. I really appreciate it.

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aluna50's picture

& i'm glad i did.  this is cool.  gonna put it on the garage wall or smthing.  what else have u written?  Laughing

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doe333's picture

@ aluna: Thank you very much :) I actually have published a book of poetry and a short story collection. And I started this blog in the summer, which I've been desparately trying to find the time to get back into: https://othershadows.wordpress.com/ 

HELLFIGHTER's picture

I'LL BE BACK !

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dakotamoon's picture

puppy

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doe333's picture

Puppy paw and burning hand both approve! Thanks.

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