From ashes she has risen,
To sing nocturnal songs.
A dark and ghastly vision
To those that did her wrong.
Her body in the shallows;
Her spirit free to roam.
She slips into the shadows
And finds her way back home.
To speak of violent purpose,
To think of mortal pain,
Can only scratch the surface
Of this, her earthly reign.
And in this path of vengeance
Her wrath will never cease,
Until they pay their penance;
Then she can rest in peace.
From Ashes She Has Risen
!!Brilliant!! . . . [X_x] . . .
Interesting
Interesting concept. I like the creepy and foreboding atmosphere of this piece. It feels like something is lurking in the dark; waiting to grab you when you least expect it.
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Thanks for the comments. I really appreciate it.
i accidentally clicked on this...
& i'm glad i did. this is cool. gonna put it on the garage wall or smthing. what else have u written?
Re: From Ashes She Has Risen
@ aluna: Thank you very much :) I actually have published a book of poetry and a short story collection. And I started this blog in the summer, which I've been desparately trying to find the time to get back into: https://othershadows.wordpress.com/
@Doe
FROM ASHES
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Puppy paw and burning hand both approve! Thanks.
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