I'm not very good at writing but I gave it a shot... please go easy on me.
Here we go
I didn’t open my eyes, not yet. The grass beneath told me that I wasn’t in my bed any more. The crisp cold of the dew on the grass licked my skin with their acid tongues, slithering out from their rancid mouths, mocking me. Finally I forced myself to open my eyes, a bright blue sky greeted me with the dark clouds clinging to the loving sky suffocating her, like the menacing memories that I know will soon plague me.
acid tounge!!??
deep!!!
Re: Acid Tongue
I've always been bad at coming up with names, its the hardest part
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It's not bad at all. I like it. You give details and emotions behind the details. Good job
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