Fractured part 2

Fractured part 2

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Everyone was in a long line at a convince store their were two lines one for normal purchases and the other for lotto a beautiful women was playing the lotto suddenly two armed men ran into the store they wore all black and totted 9mm handguns everyone dropped to the ground.The two men at the cash registers were caught off guard but the cashier in the lotto lane quickly reached for the revolver under the counter aiming before he could pull the trigger he was quickly gunned down his body shook,From the impact of the bullets he twitched and blood splattered on him along with the other cashier he fail down bleeding out they began emptying out the registers you guys are monsters said the women shut up bitch how bought we take you they grabbed he the other cashier jumped up he shot the robber on the left.Right in the shoulder he was shot in the side they ran off with the women jumping in the truck drive they told the short haired female driver the truck spead off at an alarming rate.

One of the thieves sat in the back with the women with the handgun pressing against her side don't make a move he said in a strong tone how much did you get said the female drive uh nine hundred dollars.Pretty good score huh yea you don't know who i am said the women in the back well  then who the fuck are you i'm a god damn cop they removed their masks we are gonna kill you anyway the males laughed.A report on the radio began"attention anyone the serial killer known as the valkyrie has struck again killing a rich florida couple she uses her smarts and charm to make ordinary people do her deeds then kills them".Wade the thief in the front quickly turned the radio channel to rock you should have payed more attention to that report why replied Wade whats wrong Sarah she grabbed his gun with lightning speed.

Call me Valkyrie she blew his brains out shattering the passenger window Simon the other thief grabbed her Valkyrie swerved very fast flipping the truck over metal and car scraps flew everywhere.The truck came to a rest no one stirred from the wreckage suddenly someone was heard crawling out of the truck threw the broken glass it was the valkyrie she looked up at the moon smiling.She grabbed the duffle bag looking into the truck glass was completely lauged in Simons throat the cop was trying to get a clear look at valkyries face "hey cop tell my many fans i'm back you all say your gonna stop my fun but my games only beginning now catch me if you all can.

She said in a sexy tone as the female cop passed out it was day time the truck had yellow tape around it Stephani was sitting on the back of the ambulance drinking some coffee her captain walked over to her are you all right yes she said replying.Now we have to catch her more than ever and we will he replied captain Moor was a chubby man dressed very sharp with a brookland accent.I wake up in a hot car with the sun shining on my face the car was as hot as hell.I'm wearing a leather jacket with a black dress my mind wonders what did she do no what did i do from the looks of it i'm in some city.I see a clothing store no one seems to be in the building i exit the car running to the alley i search the jacket luckily finding a hair pin i begin picking the lock entering the building.

I begin searching around for clothes that fit my style a blue and white stripped collared shirt,black pants man am i a mess i turn around seeing Valkyrie trying on a dress oh hey stranger you should try this one on instead more people will look at you she laughed,I became frustrated with her lack of mercy shut the fuck up i scream i'm done with you all taking over and joyriding my body.I will find a way to get rid of all of you bastards i'll be sure to tell the others she disappeared.Some strange feeling compelled me to turn around someone punched me dead on in the face i fail to the ground with my lip busted i looked up my attacker wore a mangers tag i began backing up.No you don't you junkie he began punching me some more in my own defence i punched him as hard as i could.

He stumbled back falling on a table with shirts i got up suddenly the manager was gone and valkyrie was back we are coming its time you leave i snapped running over to her punching her she laughed and laughed teasing and infuriating me.Out of breath and my heart pulsating i stopped gazing at what i had done the manager wasn't breathing and his face was all fucked up.I began resuscitating him after a while i began loosing hope finally he began breathing but just barely his blood had soon hardened.Running to the phone i dialed 911 giving the the address if you stay they'll question you and then bam life behind bars you want have to worry about being raped but you will be committed is that what you want said Henry.I don't like him or the other personalities inside my mind i bolted out of the back door running as far as my leg would take me.

Thats a boy yelled Henry clapping in the distance its only a matter of time he said disappearing the news reported that a manager of a John Lui store was brutally attacked and that he's in critical condition.I sat down in the dinner eating or at least attempting to the lemon pie my favorite couldn't cheer me up hey Tom,Tom said a voce at least five times until i turned around seeing a man wearing street clothes i pondered the possibilities of who he was and what he wanted from me.

[To be continued]

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part 2 of my story i hope anyone who views likes it please comment

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