I think probably an hour or two ago,"Eric said . "How old is she,sir?"the operator asked. "Twenty-six," Eric replied. "And her name,siir?" the operator asked ,pausing for Eric. "Kathy Wright, Eric said. "Kathy what,sir?" she asked. "Kathy Wright. Damn it!" Eric yelled. "Are you saying Bright or white,sir?" she asked. "Did you take a illiteracy test to get that job?" Eric snapped sarcastically."Listen good. Turn up your hearing aid," Eric yelled. "Ka-thy W-R-I-G-H-T," Eric yelled. "Oh, it's [wright]? I'm sorry,sir. Okay,we'll send a unit out there in about ten minutes,"the operator said. Before the woman could say any more,Eric hung up. Kathy had taken small sips of her drink. Eric sat down next to her . " I don't understand how something like this could happen,"Eric said,finishing his drink. "I need to take a shower,I feel terrible," Kathy said. "You can't. You have to wait until the police get here," Eric said . The headlights from a approaching car pulled in front of the house,followed by th slammming of two car doors. Two officers were about to knock on the door when eric got to the door first and opened it. Two officers walked in wearing dark blue shirts over light grey colored pants. Charles Griffin was tall,white,with reddish hair and a thick mustache. Officer Griffin had a little bit of a pot belly that rested on his belt buckle. George Raleigh was tall,muscular,brown-skinned with short black hair. Kathy was heavily questioned and she tried her best to explain what happened while she awaited an ambulance. "There is one question that we need answered?"officer Raleigh said. What is it Kathy asked. "Can you at least tell me what he looked like before the ambulance gets here?" officer Griffin asked,taking over. Kathy looked up at everyone with red tearful eyes, smoothing her hands over her hair. "It was nobody!" she said . "What!?" both officers asked together. Written by DEAD CRAZY
Nobody
hey this was great is this like a deleted chapter shaping up to the real story i mean a start point that was taking out giving some insight into the story
Re: NOBODY>>>>>>>CONTINUED 4 COMPLETION
I like it...stating the obvious. I feel torn, I like the ending that you have...and yet I want more to it. Is there more to it? In its entirerty, I think that its a great piece of writing...and if this is all to it, that it would be a wonderful short film. I love th plotline! I think that its not touched apon enough...and whenever it is, its never done greatly...or atleast I haven't seen a good film on it. This would be a great one. Have you ever heard of paranormal enitity? Its a so-called documentary...its not bad. You should look it up if you haven't seen it when you have the time, I think you would apprceiate it. I really, really, love this piece...I'm saddened that it ended so quickly, but I do like the ending. Short, sweet and complete! I can't wait to see more of your work! Peace, loev and vicodin!
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