I wrote this about an ex and the girl that he cheated on me with. I was with him for four years and he had no problem being close to her around me. And I put up with it for a long time...stupid me. I've learned from it though...and have since moved on greatly.
Anyways....here's the poem.
"OPIUM"
So I sit here and watch you fly, as she leans back.
I looked at you both as I watch you shoot her up...to make this night worth the best.
I watch the needle sink in as her cleavage shows through her dress, her beautiful sun-kissed chest.
Look at this girl, is she the one who you promised dope?
She inhaled all your opium until she chocked.
So there you both go....
Off to fly!
She's taken what was MINE.
She has taken what was MINE.
Have fun and fly...
As I sit and burn.
Hmmm
Interesting poem. Is it a drug poem?
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Yes. I was addicted to dope a few years ago, for a long time. This ex was the one who got me into it. And there was a time that myself, he and his ex were all getting high together and he was all over her that night right in front of me. His thoughts on the matter was appreantly.... he thought that when I was high I wouldn't care if he kissed her and felt her up as he was sitting right next to me...and he gave her some of the shit that I bought aswell. The whole situation was fucked. lol. Peace, love and vicodin!
RE:"Opium" A short poem.
I like short poems..this was good...
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Thanks Joe!!! I'm glad u liked it! I appreate the comment! Thank u!
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Sorry to hear that. I didn't mean anything by it. I was just trying to see if that was what it was about. Nice poem. It shows vulnerability in it's primitive form.
Its all good man!
Nah, don't worry about it man. I got no problem talkin' about it. That was like...5 maybe 6 years ago...yea. U didn't like offend me or anything, it's all good! Luv ya bro. Peace, love and vicodin!
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Cool. Nice poem, by the way.
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