Okay. I've decided to re-vamp my story entitled " Promise", because I felt it wasn't strong enough in the idea of taking you into its world. Yes, there was a story, but that's it! A story should take you into a world to feel the emotions and ideas behind it. If you see this, I am just letting you know.
RE: Redoing Promise
Thanks for the heads up twisted. Can't wait til you finish and share with the rest of us. LATER
Re: Littleboo
I felt the story was good, but it held no depth to it. A story wouldn't be a story without some type of scenery. I just put small things in there, rather than actually showing a place these characters interact.
RE: @ twisted
Cool so far. When you are done please let me know. I'm curious to keep reading to see what happens. I'm hooked.
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