Ah Man!!! another got to wait for story...well hurry up with part 2..you rayne are just teasers...sounds like it's gonna be another goodie...Keep em coming..as usual I'm Hooked..lol....Peace...Joe
Sounds awesome so far....waiting for part 2.....
Very interesting ending. I didn't see that ending.
Yupper, I knew it would be a goodie...keep em coming and i'll read em for sure....Peace...Joe
That was awesome!!! I will keep a lookout for more of ur work.....
it was definitly short and to the point .it was a good read.lat's see what you come up with next