Fabrication of Flesh ( is now Baby Dolls)- Warning: graphic violence and gore. (Cancelled)

Fabrication of Flesh ( is now Baby Dolls)- Warning: graphic violence and gore. (Cancelled)

twistedstoryteller123's picture

Eh, I cancelled this story because I need to concentrate on one story and I lost interests in this story, so I apologize for the inconvience. Good day

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metalzombieholocost's picture

is that the movie?

littleboo's picture

Can't wait until you post this one. Loved your last story that was posted.

twistedstoryteller123's picture

No, this is a story I am going to make. Something happened and I forgot to actually write something. I only managed the title. Sorry for the mix-up

trent13131369's picture

Dude, I totally loved it. Your discrpiton of emtions, the slight sceneroy, and the dio was brillant. I'm offically sucked in...waiting, wanting more. u have a total of only 3 sentance and u've captovated an audience, that in essance makes a great writer, which u definatly are. I'm offically gonna search here for more of ur pieces. Is this a novel or a screenplay? U know thats theres a group for writers on here, right? Y don't ya' join? I'm a writer as well, I'm also a filmmaker. I do stricktly screenplay's, just my choice no other reason. I've been wanting to do a horror for years, as u know u can never force things, no matter how much u want to...I've just started writing a horror. It's not easy, u make it seem like is it...u just got that nach i guess. Please lemmie know when u've posted more on this, i'm gonna continously check in for it!!! Peace, love and vicodin!

twistedstoryteller123's picture

Thanks, I really appreciate your compliments. I just write as a hobby, nothing more. No, this is a story I am working on about a sadistic man that kills women and uses their organs to make living baby dolls.

trent13131369's picture

Dude, i'm so wicked glad that you added on to this!!! I love how it's coming along! I also love the fact that you respond to all of your comments...i've nocticed alot of people don't do that...I love the fact that you do. It giives you a closer feeling to the material...so a million kudos for that one!!! lol. Please let me know whenever you do! I'll always keep checking though. I love what you've added. It gives alot more description of the people and the scenary. I remember the first one you posted, and I liked that one alot...the less you had made it scary. I loved the way you had him gut her out. That was awsome. Also as you wrote you added her thoughts, very nice touch. When you wrote about the killer licking his yellow teeth...made me cringe a bit...I could picture his dirty mouth in my head. Very nice! Also...I've noticed that it is mentioned alot that he is doing this ni a very dim light...does he do that with all of his victims? Is there a reason why he likes the dim light? Some sort of significance? I can't wait 'till you post more man!!! Peace, love and vicodin!!!

twistedstoryteller123's picture

Aside from setting the mood, I added dim light to signify something from his past. Thanks again.

asherz's picture

There's a strip joint where I lived called Baby Dolls. I hear they have a one legged stripper. 

twistedstoryteller123's picture

Cool. Good to know. I got another wrinkle in the ol' brain!

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